Monday, January 12, 2015

Syllabus Spring 2014 Section N




ENG 100-N
Machine Culture: our technology, our selves
Spring 2015 W-F 11:30-12:45 Duffy 213
CRN: 40768




Prof. Peek
Office: Cushing-Martin 123
Email: wpeek@stonehill.edu
Office hours: Wednesdays 1-2:15 until Spring Break: Wednesdays 4-5:30 after Spring Break; I am also available most Mondays 11:30-1:00 and Fridays after 2:30.  Please confirm office hour visits via email.

Class blog: http://machinecultureN.blogspot.com

Is your Smart Phone making you dumber? Is your Roomba innocently vacuuming by day while plotting world domination by night? When you hear a machine beeping and you jump to respond, is the machine serving you or are you serving it? As Artificial Intelligence expert Josh Hall frames the issue, if we can program a robot that will be more moral than humans, should we then allow it to rule us?

This class explores the representation of technology, both technophilic and technophobic visions, as created by artists from ancient Athens to the 21st century. The questions we pursue will include: to what extent is technology the friend or foe of humanity? Will machines enable our perfection or enhance our flaws? Would it be better if our machines were more or less like us?

Our primary method of analysis will be close-reading, a technique that demands careful attention to the details of literary language as we read familiar texts in new contexts.  Our guiding question: as we study these older works as parables about technology, what will we newly see in them and in ourselves?

This class is 3 credits, which means that you are expected to put in 6-9 hours per week outside of class for preparation. Your daily responsibilities include coming to class on time every day with the materials assigned for discussion (or notes from your readings) and with the assignment completed.

NOTE: The class-determined penalty for not bringing assigned reading to class will be that the violator must …bring food to the next class.

Required Texts:
In the Stonehill Bookstore:
Aeschylus. Prometheus Bound. Oxford U. P. ISBN: 0195061659
Shakespeare, William. The Tempest. New Folger Library. ISBN: 0743482832
Wells, H. G. The War of the Worlds. Penguin. ISBN-10: 0141441038

On Reserve:
Asimov, Isaac, “Bicentennial Man” (available on Ares)
Blade Runner (dir. Ridley Scott, 1982; streaming on Ares)
Brynjolfsson, Erik and Andrew McAfee, Race Against the Machine, (Digital Frontier Press, 2012), chapter 2 (Ares)
her (dir. Spike Jonze, 2014; streaming on Ares)
Kurzweil,  Ray. The Age of Intelligent Machines (MIT Press, 1992), Intro and Chapter 5, “Mechanical Roots” (Ares).
Little Red Riding Hood (dir. David Kaplan, 1997; on regular reserve)
Plug & Pray (dir. Jens Schanze, 2010; on regular reserve)
The Terminator (dir. James Cameron, 1984; on regular reserve)

DAILY SCHEDULE:
Please note that the pop quizzes will expect you to know vocabulary from the readings.  Thus, it is your task to look up and learn vocabulary that is not familiar to you. In addition, pop quizzes may cover all the materials you're asked to read or view before class, and may ask you about the arguments of the material you read.

Key terms for assigned work:
Read for class or View for class means that you need to read this material before class meets to discuss it.
In-class work or View in class means that I will introduce the material or we will read it together in class.
Discussion questions are questions that you should think about and jot down notes for, with relevant page numbers, before class, but you will not need to turn in your answers.

Note, too, that I reserve the right to alter the syllabus during the course of the semester.

W Jan 14
Review Syllabus
Read for class: “There will come soft rains” from The Martian Chronicles (PDF emailed)

F Jan 16
Representation 1: Form and Content

W Jan 21
Representation 2: Representation and Metaphor
“In-class Metaphor Exercise”

F Jan 23
Representation 3: Metonymy, synecdoche, and writing about poetry
Homework to turn in: Read the “Representation and Figurative Language” page link on the class blog.  Using the subordinate and superordinate method we’ve learned in class, diagram the poem by Hughes that you find there.
Quiz on Syllabus

W Jan 28
Snow Day

F Jan 30
Representation 4: Poetry


Homework to turn in: “Homework Assignment for Representation Day 4”
Review homework done during snow days


Hand out poems for Paper #1
Sign up in class to workshop 

W Feb 4
Representation 5: Details make the difference
Homework to turn in: “Homework Assignment on Vendler and ‘Praise in Summer’”  
Read for class: Jacob and Wilhelm Grimm, “Little Red-Cap” (in packet)
View for class: Little Red Riding Hood, dir. David Kaplan, 1997; available on reserve
    NOTE: this film is only about 12 minutes long.  You can also find it on YouTube.
Prepare for class: a list of the formal differences between the Grimm and Kaplan versions of the Little Red Riding Hood story

Discuss in class: Writing papers about poetry
Sign up to be Resource People

UNIT 1: Machine Natives?

F Feb 6
"We are here to be curious, not to be consoled.  The gift of the gods is consciousness."  Jim Harrison

Read for class: Prometheus Bound to p. 62 AND the following essays in the "Introduction" section: "I: the Myth," (p. 3ff.), and "II: The Prometheus Bound" (p. 6ff.).  Don't worry if you don't understand everything in these essays, but they'll still provide you with useful information.

Helpful Hint: Make full use of the Notes and Glossary at the end; they explain many elements that may be unclear. 

Discussion Questions (jot down answers to bring to class and cite SPECIFIC PASSAGES for your answers):
Who is Prometheus? (see notes at back of book) How is he characterized?  That is, what does his manner of speaking reveal about his character, and what do other characters say about him?

Who is Hephaistos (in 1st 4 pages)? What does his manner of speaking reveal about his character, and what do other characters say about him?

Who is Zeus? What does his manner of speaking reveal about his character, and what do other characters say about him?

Who is Ocean? What does his manner of speaking reveal about his character, and what do other characters say about him?

Who is Io (beginning p. 55)? What does her manner of speaking reveal about her character, and what do other characters say about her?

Writing instruction: Key words and body paragraphs with Paul Fussell

W February 11
Read for class
1.              Prometheus Bound to end
2.              "Daedalus & Icarus" from Ovid, Metamorphoses (in packet). Note: if the Ovid passage is maddeningly obscure, look up "Minotaur" in the search engine at theoi.com.   Feel free to poke around the site to learn more about the characters in this story.
3.              Rebecca J. Rosen, “So, was Facebook responsible for the Arab Spring after all?”
View for class:  Frontline: "Digital Nation" (Feb. 2, 2010).  Watch at least the first 26 minutes (until the end of the Korean song).

Optional viewing:
ForaTV, “Technology’s Role in Arab Spring Protests” (it’s only about 4 minutes long)

Homework to complete for class: Bring one typed paragraph to class in answer to each of these questions (one paragraph for each):
1. The Icarus story is often taught as a moral tale about listening to one’s parents.  What details in the story support that reading? Quote them.

2. If we were to read this story as being about new technologies, which details would we focus on to support that reading? Quote them.

Discuss in class: different models of intro paragraphs; or, how to integrate quotations

F Feb 13 Paper #1 Due--Workshoppers only: Eric, Kristina, Alex
NOTE: If you are NOT workshopping your paper today, meet in Duffy 118 during our regularly scheduled class time (11:30).

W Feb 18 Paper #1 Due –Everyone else and workshoppers Yamilex, David, and Tim
NOTE: If you workshopped your paper on Feb. 13, meet in Duffy 206 during our regularly scheduled class time (11:30).  Everyone else, your paper is due today in its folder.

UNIT 2: Machine Love

F Feb 20
View for class: "Be Right Back" Black Mirror, Season 2, Ep. 1
Read for class: E. M. Forester, “The Machine Stops” (packet)
Resource People: Alex & Katherine

W February 25
View for class: her (dir. Spike Jonze, 2014, Ares)
Read for class: Bradbury, "The Long Years" (PDF)
Resource People: Chase, Nate, Tim

Unit 3: Machine Fear
“I for one welcome our new computer overlords."
Ken Jennings, Jeopardy player after being beaten by computer Watson

F Feb 27
Intro to Modernity
Clip show: Modern Times
Read for class:
1.     Erik Brynjolfsson and Andrew McAfee, Race Against the Machine, chapter 2 (Ares)
2.     In packet: “Unit 4: the Technology of Modernity.”  These readings include: page titled FYS 113 on Pastoralism, etc.; a reading from The Culture of Time and Space.

W Mar 4
Read for class: The War of the Worlds, to p. 30
Discussion Questions:
1. Do you see pastoral ideas represented in the novel?
2. What aspects of late 19th century technology are represented in the novel?  Are they represented in a positive way? A negative way? Some other way?
3. Consider the location at the start of the novel (see the map at the back).  Why does Wells begin the story here, rather than in a city, the symbol par excellence of modernity?
Review topics for Paper #2

F Mar 6
Read for Class: The War of the Worlds, to p. 112 (through Book 1)
Resource People: Anthony, Jennah, Justine

W Mar 11 Spring Break
F Mar 13 Spring Break

W Mar 18
Read for class: The War of the Worlds, to end
Resource People: Katie, Hutch

F March 20
View for class: The Terminator (available on Ares)
Resource People: Dave, Kevin, Royce

W Mar 25
Prof out sick

F Mar 27
Paper #2 due: Workshoppers: Justine, Katie, Brendan
If you are a workshopper on April 1, watch Plug & Pray. Everyone else, come to class with your papers in their folders.

W April 1
Paper #2 due: Workshoppers: Anthony, Katherine, Ashley, Jennah, Mateusz

F Apr 3 Easter Break (April 8 follows a Monday schedule)

Unit 4: Robo sapiens: Machine Intelligence

F April 10
Workshoppers' papers due

View for classPlug & Pray. The DVD is on reserve in the library (not on Ares).  You can also watch it at Hulu: http://www.hulu.com/watch/480764 (dir. Jens Schanze, 2010).  BUT: try watch this in one sitting (it's about 2 hours long).  Otherwise Hulu will let you play this only on Hulu Plus, unless you delete the Hulu cookie and try re-loading the film.http://www.hulu.com/watch/480764 (dir. Jens Schanze, 2010, also streaming on ERes)

Read for class:
1.              Ray Kurzweil, The Age of Intelligent Machines, Intro and Chapter 5, “Mechanical Roots” (ERes)
2.              The New York Times, "Failing like a buggy whip maker?" Jan. 9, 2010.

Listen to for class: RadioLab: “Talking to Machines” Season 10, Ep. 1

Write to turn in in class: in two typed paragraphs, write about the content and form of Plug & Pray.
1.              Content: did the film present a distinct point of view on the issue of artificial intelligence? If so, what was that view?
2.              Form: picking one or two scenes, how does the film’s representation of either an individual or a particular space shape your interpretation of them?

W April 15
Snacks provided by Nate!
Read for class: Isaac Asimov, “Bicentennial Man” (available on Ares)
Resource People: Poli, Mateusz

F April 17
View for class: Blade Runner (dir. Ridley Scott, 1982, Ares)
Resource People: Eric, Joe, Kristina

W Apr 22
Paper #3 due: workshoppers: Kevin, Royce 
Only these three workshoppers need to come to class today.

F Apr 24
Snacks provided by Joe!
Paper #3 due: workshoppers: Joe, Nate, Chase, Hutch, Jackie
Everyone come to class with your papers in their folders (except for workshoppers, and Jackie, Chase and Royce)

W April 29
Snacks provided by Chase!
Read for class: Isaac Asimov, "The Life and Times of Multivac" (pdf)
Resource People: Ashley, Yamilex

PROCEDURAL MATTERS AND POLICIES:
Assignments and Grades:
Everyone in the class writes three papers that compose 50% of the final grade (with an extra 5% going to the paper with the best grade). Work as a resource person and strong participation generally will compose 15% of your final grade. The grades from five of the six (or more) pop quizzes (the lowest grade is dropped) compose 15% of the final grade. The final exam (with essay section) is worth 15%.

Papers and Quizzes:
Format:
1) Format your papers with 1" margins on all sides, double-spaced, and fonts no larger than 12 point (scaled roughly to Times New Roman size). Cover sheets are a waste of paper, but a thoughtful title is always appreciated.

2) It is not necessary to provide a “Works Cited” page for assigned readings. If you use materials not explicitly assigned in class, cite them using MLA Style (the basics are parenthetical references with a Works Cited page). When in doubt, use one of the “Recommended Sites for Grammar, Usage, and Punctuation,” available at a link on the right.

3) When you turn in your papers, put them in your folder and make sure that all previous course work, including drafts and other papers, are included in the notebook. You will not receive a grade on a paper until you turn in the originals of your previous papers in their folder, with my comments.

General Policies:
1) The grade on late papers will drop 10 points per calendar day that the paper is late. A paper is considered late if it is turned in after the start of class on the day it is due.  
2) If illness prevents you from turning a paper in on time, email me as soon as possible, and well make appropriate arrangements. If you have a computer draft of a paper, you may email that to me on the due date.
3) You must complete all of the assignments to pass the class (even if they are turned in so late that they cannot receive a passing grade).
5) Pop quizzes cannot be made up.  If you're absent on the day of a pop quiz, that quiz will be one of your dropped quiz grades.

Procedures:
1) Once a semester, you will workshop one of your papers in class. That is, you will read a draft of your paper to the class and they will make suggestions directed toward making it a stronger paper. You can then take their verbal comments and turn in a final draft of the paper due a week after the day of the workshop. You can continue to work with me polishing the paper even after it is workshopped. The logistics: when its your turn to workshop, email your paper to me by 10 am the afternoon theyre due, and I will make copies of the paper for the class to read.


Do not miss class on the day your paper is to be workshopped.  Your grade on the paper will drop by 10 points, and you will miss the benefit of feedback from your peers.

See the link on the RH side of the blog for detailed instructions on workshopping and serving as a Resource Person.

2) I encourage you to bring rough drafts to my office hours for discussion. Sometimes we can have even more productive meetings if several class members come at the initial stage of thesis development. I cannot read emailed drafts unless I specifically ask for them.

Grading Guidelines: I give out numerical rather than alphabetical grades. The scale is:
97 = A+
93 = A
90 = A-
87 = B+
83 = B
80 = B-
77 = C+
73 = C
70 = C-
67 = D+
63 = D
60 = D-
59 & below = F

F = You fail to turn in the paper, or your paper lacks a thesis, or you have no arguments or evidence in defense of your thesis. Simply completing the work does not guarantee a passing grade.

D = A thesis with some supporting arguments and examples/quotations. A “D” signifies serious problems with the organization of the argument (weak topic sentences, unconvincing examples, no transitions between ideas) and/or with expression (diction, wordiness, poor grammar, mechanical errors, lack of necessary specifics).

C = A clear thesis, with some convincing supporting arguments with examples/quotations. Some acknowledgment of relevant objections, if appropriate. A “C” indicates that there are problems with organization and/or developments of the thesis, although the writing may be clear and the argument convincing.

B = A clear thesis, with fully developed and convincing supporting arguments. Appropriate and helpful examples/quotations. Careful attention to details of expression, whether verbal or visual. Sensitivity to the subtleties of the text. You demonstrate that you are a careful reader as well as a competent writer. Consideration and refutation of relevant objections, if appropriate. Free of mechanical errors.

A = Everything required for a B, plus significant, original thought. The thesis and analysis in an “A” paper are sophisticated, complex, subtle. In particular, the work with quotations closely reads and builds on the ideas in the quotations.

Attendance Policy:
Attend every class. We have a lot of ground to cover in a very short amount of time. If you become ill during the semester, send me an email immediately. Please find a friendly face in class to take notes for you and to collect or turn in any handouts or assignments that are due.

If you encounter circumstances that make it difficult to abide by this policy, come and talk to me. An excessive number of absences will have a deleterious effect on your final grade. It is necessary, though not sufficient, that you attend at least 75% of the classes for a passing grade.

Diversity and inclusion: Stonehill College embraces the diversity of students, faculty, and staff, honors the inherent dignity of each individual, and welcomes their unique cultural and religious experiences, beliefs, and perspectives. We all benefit from a diverse living and learning environment, and the sharing of differences in ideas, experiences, and beliefs help us shape our own perspectives. Course content and campus discussions will heighten your awareness to these differences.


The Office of Intercultural Affairs (Duffy 149) serves as an accessible resource to anyone seeking support or with questions about diversity and inclusion at Stonehill. If you are a witness to or experience acts of bias at Stonehill or would like to learn more about how we address bias incidents, please email diversity@stonehill.edu.

English Department Policy on Plagiarism
In support of Stonehill College's Academic Integrity Policy, the English Department requires that its faculty notify the Director of Academic Services about every student who has plagiarized or violated the Academic Honor Code in any manner.  All members of the College community have the responsibility to be familiar with and to follow the College's policy on academic integrity.  Since the actions that constitute violation of the policy are covered in many places, including The Hill Book and in presentations at orientation, pleading ignorance will not work.  If you have questions about what constitutes a violation of the code or how to incorporate outside sources in your work, please consult with your professor before you turn in your assignment.

Academic Integrity: 
My expectation is that you will adhere to the Academic Honor Code and Academic Integrity Policy, which can be accessed in the Academic Policies section of the 2014-2015 Hill Book.

(From the The Hill Book): Academic dishonesty includes but is not limited to the following actions:

1.  Presenting another's work as if it were one's own;
2.  Failing to acknowledge or document a source even if the action is unintended (i.e., plagiarism);
[N. B. This can take various forms: 1) using the writer's exact words without proper punctuation and citation; 2) paraphrasing the argument without crediting the author; 3) providing a paraphrase that is too close to the original—even if you cite the author; 4) even following the general outline or drift of the argument without indicating the source of the idea];

3. Giving or receiving, or attempting to give or receive, unauthorized assistance or information in an assignment or examination
4.  Fabricating data;
5.  Submitting the same assignment in two or more courses without prior permission of the respective instructors;
6.  Having another person write a paper or sit for an examination;
7.  Unauthorized use of electronic devices to complete work; or
8.  Furnishing false information, including lying or fabricating excuses, for incomplete work.

Because we have reviewed in class what constitutes academic honesty, we will not consider ignorance of the rules to be a valid excuse.   A violation of Stonehills Academic Integrity Policy will result in a failing grade for the course.

When in doubt, always verify with me if something is being done properly or is allowable in this class rather than simply make an assumption based on the fact that it was or is currently allowable in another class. 

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Students registered with the Office of Disability Services are encouraged to self-advocate and contact their professors as soon as possible, preferably prior to the start of the semester, to inform them of the accommodations for which they qualify.

Students are responsible for providing their professors with an accommodations verification letter from the Office of Disability Services and discussing their needs with them.

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Saturday, January 10, 2015

Paper #3 Due Friday, April 24--Note changed due date!


Paper #3 Topic:

  • Put together two texts that disagree with each other on some important point about technology and its representation, and write about which one makes the more convincing argument and why
  • Alternately, you can focus your paper on some interesting way that their representation of technology differs, exploring the differences and the implications of their different views.  
  • Or you might look for an surprising similarity between two texts that seem different on first reading;
  • Or, you might find a surprising difference between texts that initially seem to share a similar representation. 

It might be especially interesting to pair a fiction text (or poem or film) with a non-fiction text. If a text showcases two opposed viewpoints, like Plug & Pray, it’s okay if you concentrate on just one of those views.

What will the thesis look like?
            Your thesis might answer a question like: which of these texts makes the more convincing argument through its representation and why?  What elements of form and content contribute to its success? Note that it’s important that you pay attention to the details of both texts.
             Or: Text X represents technology as harmful to humanity, while Text Y represents the same technology as beneficial.  Why this difference?  What does each fail to see about the other? Do these texts represent the same technology in importantly different ways?
             Or: Although both Text X and Text Y present dystopian views of the future of technology, Text X suggests that people, rather than technology, will be the problem, while Text Y argues the reverse.

Who is the audience?
             Someone who is already familiar with these texts. No plot summary is necessary, though you will need to contextualize your evidence.

Length
            4-5 pages, though it’s okay if you write more.  If your paper is shorter than you’d like, add more ideas and examples, not generalizations.

How to develop the thesis?
            Write answers to each of these freewriting prompts below for both texts.  That activity will help you refine your thesis and remind you of important details from each. 
            Then take the best parts of your freewriting and organize them into your paper, adding and revising as necessary to develop your arguments.

Freewriting prompts:
·      What does each text argue for? Which character or person represents that argument?

·      What do these people say that asserts the argument (select your quotations)?

·      What scenes or moments are the most important for in representing this view and why are they significant? 

·      What particular details of form (like a character’s name, or the setting, or music or other elements of mise-en-scène) help their argument? 

·      Are there particular details of form that hurt or work against their argument? 

Some tips:
It is a good idea to ask me about the texts you’re pairing if you have doubts.

Plan to work on your paper in 4 stages:
  • Look over everything we've read and pick one or two pairs that will work well together.
  • Freewrite in response to the freewriting prompts.
  • Write a draft of your paper, using the technique below (about the outside reader) to organize your paragraphs.
  • Polish your draft, paying special attention to the areas I noted that you need to work on.
  • NOTE: every full page that is free of punctuation errors (this includes punctuation around quotations) will get 2 extra points/full page added to the final grade (up to 8 pts)!

The "outside reader" technique:
When you organize your argument, consider using the technique we worked on in class:  Imagine a reader encountering your thesis for the first time.  What questions would she ask?  Which would be the most pressing?  Which would be more specific?  Rank these questions from most pressing to most specific (that will be the order of paragraphs in your paper) and make the answers to them your TS.  This procedure can help you organize your paragraphs and have them follow clearly from your thesis.

Some sample pairings (these are just preliminary suggestions):
Joseph Weizenbaum from Plug & Pray and Yeats’ “Sailing to Byzantium”
Ray Kurzweil from Plug & Pray and Brautigan’s “All Watched Over…”
Ray Kurzweil from Plug & Pray and “BRB”
“The Life and Times of Multivac” and The War of the Worlds—okay, even though these are both fiction
Prometheus Bound and Blade Runner—okay, even though these are both fiction